2007年10月12日 星期五
Al Gore
I saw news today. It read that the America former vice president Al Gore won the Nobel Prize. He propelled the global warming to the top of the international agenda with his film “An Inconvenient Truth,” which received a lot of attention around the world. I also watched this film few months ago, the whole plot connected to the global warming intensely. In the contents, Al Gore stood in front of many people. He emphasized the serious effect of global warming. The atmosphere was harmony. Al Gore made the speech humorously though the issue is very important. In my opinion, he devoted almost his life to propel the earth protection. I was not surprised to the news that he got the noble prize because he deserved it.
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"I saw [b]the[/b] news {WHERE? TV OR NEWSPAPER?} today. It [b]said[/b] that the [b]former American vice president Al Gore had[/b] won the Nobel Prize. He propelled global warming to the top of the international agenda with his film “An Inconvenient Truth,” which [b]has[/b] received a lot of attention around the world. I {"ALSO" IS UNNECESSARY} watched this film few months ago[b].[b/] the whole plot connected to the global warming intensely.{THIS IS A LITERAL; TRANSLATION OF CHINESE AND DOESN'T MAKE MUCH SENSE IN ENGLISH} In the contents, Al Gore stood in front of many people. He emphasized the serious effect of global warming. The atmosphere {WHAT ATMOSPHERE?} was harmony. Al Gore made the speech humorously though the issue is very important. In my opinion, he [B]HAS[/B] devoted almost his [b]entire[/b] life to [b]protecting[/b] the earth. I was not surprised to the news that he got the noble prize[b],[/b] because he deserved it."
{Most of what you say is clear, but there are still some usage and translation problems.
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